Vehicles (Part 1)

Today, we’re kicking off a two-part series on vehicles—those narrative conveyances that get your Teams from one Place to another.
In Part 1, we’re going to show you how to use a Place as a vehicle. In Part 2, we’ll talk about how to use a Thing as a vehicle.
A Place That Moves?
Let’s say you want your crew of smugglers to board a starship and blast off from the Smugglers Hideout to Kessel, hopefully avoiding Imperial entanglements and poor life choices.
You could just create a “Move to Kessel” Choice and call it a day. That's just fine. But what if your narrative requires something more elaborate?
Enter our new set piece:
🛸 The Starship On The Kessel Run.
This is a Place, not a Thing. That might feel unintuitive. A starship sounds like a Thing, right? But we want Teams to move into it and through it. And for that we need a Place.
Simulating the Journey
You’re not actually flying anyone across the galaxy. You’re faking motion with a chain of Choices, each revealing the next in line—like pulling a towel through a magician’s hand. Let’s walk through it.
Step 1: Set the Stage
You’ll need these Places:
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Smugglers Hideout (starting location)
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The Starship On The Kessel Run (your faux-vehicle)
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Kessel (final destination)
Step 2: Move People Onto the Ship
Create a Choice in Smugglers Hideout that moves your Team to The Starship.
Step 3: Plan the Chain
Here’s where it gets deliciously recursive.
You’ll need to build your Choices from last to first:
- Choice 4: "Debark to Kessel" ← revealed by
- Choice 3: “Orbit Kessel” ← revealed by
- Choice 2: “Enter Hyperspace” ← revealed by
- Choice 1: "Leave Orbit”
Every Choice must exist before another Choice can reveal it.
Step 4: Set Hidden (Trust Issues Optional)
Unless you’re showing off or prototyping, it’s safest to start these Choices hidden. That way, other players won’t stumble across your half-finished space odyssey and click something that hurls them into the void.
Step 5: Add Drama
Role-based locks on the Choices (requires +1 in Pilot, etc.) are all fair game. You can even throw in some scripted consequences. Whatever you need to sell the illusion that The Starship is doing something besides just being a Place wearing a trench coat.
In Summary
You’re not moving a ship. You’re moving Teams through a chain of Choices that pretend to be a journey.
Next time in Vehicles (Part 2), we’ll look at how to use a Thing as a vehicle.
Until then: build responsibly and chain your Choices backwards.
– The Scribarchy Team (still just me)
Scribarchy
Scribarchy: Where Writers Rule
Status | In development |
Author | Scribarchy |
Genre | Role Playing, Interactive Fiction |
Tags | Creative, Exploration, Indie, Meaningful Choices, MMORPG, Multiplayer, storygame, Text based |
Languages | English |
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